Poor Imp

It moves break-neck and doesn't quite establish (as Rosethorn notes) an age or surroundings for Damian. Spaces between paragraphs will make it easier to read, and slow down a bit. ...

haha nope, actually I am the youngest. What's it like being at the top?! Oh, I don't really know--nothing to compare it to. ^_^'' But all things were tested on ...

One of six? I suppose it's rather uncommon these days--but I am as well. ^_^ You're not the oldest by any chance? Anyhow, welcome (again) to the site. If you ...

Hullo Shafter ^_^ And Snoink's comment about masochist--it means someone who takes pleasure in and/or turns their destructive tendencies inward. -_-'' It's not the most productive attitude. ^_~ Good l

A stupid question. Ha--and one I'd tell you? No. That would be stupid, right? -Tov -- Are questions for finding truth or for dodging it?

Paper and pen--or often and sometimes pencil--work much better for the most part than typing. There's more character, sometimes, in hand-writing. ^_^ Though I do now and then write straight ...

Good music. ...Right? -Tov I don't usually like much music, at all. Silence is better. But there's not really that much silence in the city. -Aleda -- Can you watch ...

It was amusing, Chantel, as DD notes. But it's not quite non-fiction. Moved

For geography class I have to do a project with a partner on the Netherlands. I specifically am researching the birth rate, death rate, and infant mortality rate. I found ...

Hello L--welcome to YWS. Your introduction is impressive. And you did use apostrophes. Accidentally? ^_~ Anyhow, brilliant speller or no (brilliant at English, or no) if you want to write, ...

Yeah, not all of them were crappy, but some of them were fit to be tied, beaten with a stick, and then killed in some horrible way, preferably by being ...

Hee hee, thanks guys. I honestly haven't critted anything but FREAK since NaNo started, but shhh, don't tell anyone! :D Yes...I noticed that. ^_~ I was wondering where 7000 points ...

Dreams. Dark light all around, and then that. I can't remember-- -Fletcher Associa--...? Hell--been drinking something other than water? -Tov --- Do you dream, and recall your dreams?

(Chp. 4, being finished in critique here...) You should have run, he told himself silently, stalking his hunters in the deserted alley. You should have run on Pershozhen, anonymous in ...

Congratulations, Cassandra. All deserved, apparently. ^_^ I think you must be able to type and think at lightspeed--though the thinking's not always quite so important in NaNo. ^_~